August 5 Adrian Mitchell's "The Shadow Knows"
Reviewed by Rupert Mallin
This ditty sets the mood for half the collection - angry, committed political poems, often in rhyming couplets or structured forms for comic and satirical effect. They are obviously for mouth and ear, rather than the page, but an essential record of Mitchell's velvet oral delivery. Roughly half the poems in the book turn more to friends, friendship, family, love and children as subjects, and, without the need for frontal humour or irony hot enough to cook eggs on, these poems tend to explore the language more informally, like a jazz quartet tentatively breaking from a tune. Surprisingly, as I don't like dogs very much, one of my favourites here is ‘Thanks To My Dog in An Hour Of Pain’. It opens thus:
It ends with the "deep down toffee eyes" of his dog. Put the sentimentality aside a moment, the poem contrasts quite markedly in its structure with his publicly committed poems. It is fluid as opposed to crafted. Rightly, like many of the poets of his generation - Michael Rosen, Adrian Henri, Jeff Nuttall - Mitchell places his poetry at the centre of society. If poets are the “unacknowledged legislators of the world” this should be so. But like Pete and Fiona out of "Fahrenheit 9/11", who had rejoiced in the film, but were then surprised by the sense of religiosity in the cinema, having one’s beliefs reinforced can leave an aching gap between ‘answers’ and ‘questions’. That is, I worry when poetry and art illustrate reality. In British theatre there are increasing tendencies to create plays as journalism - often political, well made and knowing - like many of these poems. Let me illustrate the essence of my thoughts with Mitchell's poem ‘First Publications’:
I would rather engage in the “streamlined and alive” broken poem which is the subject of Mitchell's social commentary than ‘First Publications’ itself. This style of social observation, like a newspaper report, evokes how a poem is interacted with by an audience, but seems to achieve the reverse: as a reader (as audience) I am not party to the lavatory wall poem, before or after its reworking in bodily effluent. Like the girl, we too are locked out of the lavatory and the poem. Yes, Mitchell asks us to consider the relationship between poetry and society, but by dint of his ‘social commentary’ it is what educationalists term a “closed question”. Isn't there also an underlying sentimentality in the poem's closure? In this broken world, we are neither engaged with the “broken” people or in the “broken” poem, just in the thoughtless interaction.In my view, in the British humanitarian pacifist movement there is a kind of sentimentality, which also touches many of these poems. I think this is not only a trait in poems of social commentary but in writing for specific audiences - children, lefties, poetry followers and Guardian readers. I've never quite understood writing poems specifically for children. It seems like another division and diversion which assuages the guilt of adults. Mitchell's demand that none of his poems are ever to be used in an examination is admirable. However, in his book, there is a curious ‘advert’ for Education Otherwise who teach children taken out of state schools by their parents. Here is a sentimental notion of self help when so many disaffected young people have no option but their horrible sink school. It is the same curious sentimentality I find among “Theatre of War”, who am-dram a “die-in” in Beccles Market Place and wonder why passers by are not suddenly ‘awakened’ by this act of reality, of knowledge!However, Adrian Mitchell is a colossus on the British Poetry scene and was the first poet I read - for his rebellion, humanity, wit and ease of style. The master retains many of his powers. Yet, as I grow older, I prefer poems more broken, begging more questions of emotions and intellect (and poems free of pets). |